Last night, when I arrived on this curious island, I was exhausted. I found a thicket and passed out. This morning I awoke to a sound of water and the sweet sound of lady laughter. As I sat up I saw the most beautiful thing. Six or more beautiful girls were bathing themselves in the nearbye stream. They were all naked. One of the girls, apparently a princess, was the most beautiful. She had long brown hair and perfect breasts. I sat there watching for a while. The girls started to play a game with a small round object, throwing it back and forth to eachother. All of a sudden one of the girls missed and the ball hit the thicket I was in, poking me with a thorn. I came out, of the bushes with an leaf over my genitals. All of the girls were frightened and fleed, except the one, the princess. I fell to my knees, begging for her kindness and bosting about her beauty. She was kind, and she let me bathe myself away from them. Afterwords she gave me directions to her fathers palace. I would not walk with the females, for it was not right.
When I arrived at the palace, King Alcinous brought me in with great pleasure and kindness. He let me eat, for I was starving. I told him of my story, how I came to this island and how I fought in the battle of Troy. I asked for his help in giving me a boat for my journey home. He decided to grant me the choice of marrying his daughter or taking one of his ships home. I was overjoyed, he gave me quarters in which to sleep in, and here I am.
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3 comments:
with the writing I could imagine that I was there experiencing that stuff. the post was quite descriptive and had impressive length. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Very nice detail and word choice. Your writing gave great imagery and really puts you right in odysseus' situation.
OOOkay there kid. Sounds pretty PG-13 maybe even R. Very graphic descriptions. I would hate to see your literary skills sacaraficed for blurbs on breasts and genitals.
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